Self Evaluation

Self Evaluation 

1) What score do you think you deserve? 

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

2) What did you do well?

I chose the topic which is interesting that not only me but also a lot pf people are curious about. I also used proper articles which are related to the topic :  laughing is good for human even when it's a 'false laugh'

3) What could you have done better?

I think I was not good at writing in detail. I made a lot of grammar mistake, and I also
didn't use clear examples of mine. I only used the examples from the articles I found.
I repeated things I've already written again and again.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

the introduction part. I suggested my topic : laughing is good for human even when it's a false laugh clearly, and I made people who read my essay have interest about it, by using proper examples and proverbs.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I wrote the conclusion part the most poorly. It is because I only summarized what I've written. There's was nothing more than that. 

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my audience to hear my argument.

I will make it much more clearly by using proper examples and words. I will also correct my mistakes such as grammar mistakes by referring to teachers' advice.